Posted by: thewritingstudio | March 12, 2010

A Day with an Alien

            One day I was playing in my grandma and granddad’s garden. Then suddenly I looked up at the sky and saw some big silver splodge coming towards me. It got closer and closer and the suddenly bang, it landed in my granddad’s shed.

          My heart skipped a beat. I didn’t know what to do so I decided to walk slowly up to the shed. My legs turned to jelly I had no idea what was in there. I slowly opened the door and it started to squeak. I  popped my head in and saw a blue skinned thing which was about one metre high. It had one head with two big green eyes and one blue nose with a one pink mouth. It also had four blue antennae. Two were long and two were short.  They had little pink balls on the end. It had four arms with four hands and four fingers. It also had four feet with four toes and four nails.

So walked in and said hello and asked it if it speaks English. So it slowly replied yes. So I asked it what its name was and that my name was Aston so it said that its name was Sarlet and that she came in peace. I just laughed and told Sarlet not be afraid of me. I asked her how she got here. She told me that she came from a far away planet called Haloona and she was bored so she went in her dad’s garage and started to play around with her dads rocket, then suddenly it took off and she didn’t know how to work it so she crashed in the granddads shed.

         Then I asked her about her family and friends. She told me she had three sisters and four brothers. She told me how she had lots of friends but her best friend was called Melody. I told her how I had only one brother and that I had lots of friends but my best friend was called Tilly. I asked her about her planet and she told me that it was quite big but when it rained, it rained sweets. I told her how lucky she was to have a planet where it rained sweets andto have lots of brothers and sisters.

         I helped her fix her dad’s rocket. Then it was started to get dark and I told her I should go inside to my grandma so she said that she would go back to Haloona but before she left, she gave me a bracelet for a souvenir so I would never forget her. Then she left so I went inside to grandma and Granddad. I didn’t tell them what happened because it was mine and Sarlet`s secret.

          The next morning I woke up and thought it was all a dream but then I looked on my desk and saw the bracelet and I knew I would never ever forget my day with an alien.

 Aston Corner 6.1



  1. Very good story Aston. Keep it Up


    • nice story and you did well because i liked it

  2. That was a very good composition. Keep the job up!!!

  3. it was a nice story good job 🙂

  4. nice composition keep it up =p

  5. well done

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